By Dhanuka Nadeera Dickwella
The rage of lust
Craving every touch
Rhythm of the hugs
She moves like a husk
Skins do touch
Screams of gust
Veins of blood
Her pains are a bust
Lips are locked
Hips are numbed
Breaths are brisk
Sweats pour down
Up to a zenith on the top
Unison of a walk
No holding back
Burst of the chord
Heavens they call
Categories: #poetry, Writers' Space
The Asian Review 
This poem delves deeply into the raw emotions of lust, skillfully portraying the physical and emotional aspects with vivid imagery. The details create a palpable atmosphere, offering a unique perspective on a theme often explored in poetry. Dhanuka’s ability to capture the intensity of the experience is commendable, making this piece stand out for its evocative portrayal of passion. Wat to go!
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What a way of transforming the deepest physical and emotional feelings of two humans at their best performance, into words…… awesome
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